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	<title>Comments on: I&#8217;m writing a mafia/outlaw novel any tips?</title>
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		<title>By: Alice</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alice</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 30 Jan 2010 17:11:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Reading your question put an entirely different idea in my head which I thought was clever: a western with mafia characters. However, after reading further, I see you weren&#039;t thinking along those lines at all. Too bad, I find that much more intriguing. And fun. In any event, good luck to you.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Reading your question put an entirely different idea in my head which I thought was clever: a western with mafia characters. However, after reading further, I see you weren&#8217;t thinking along those lines at all. Too bad, I find that much more intriguing. And fun. In any event, good luck to you.<br /><b>References : </b></p>
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		<title>By: Alex</title>
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		<dc:creator>Alex</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 30 Jan 2010 16:55:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mafia stories are too often done, though they are usually good, but I dislike how people end up rooting for the bad people (Mafia) and start hating the good people (example: police). 

Instead, why don&#039;t you make it about a girl who infiltrates the mafia and helps the police catch them.

But it is your book and if you go with your original idea, I think if done properly, it could be very realistic. Just make sure that you make the girl have some redeeming qualities.&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;References : &lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mafia stories are too often done, though they are usually good, but I dislike how people end up rooting for the bad people (Mafia) and start hating the good people (example: police). </p>
<p>Instead, why don&#8217;t you make it about a girl who infiltrates the mafia and helps the police catch them.</p>
<p>But it is your book and if you go with your original idea, I think if done properly, it could be very realistic. Just make sure that you make the girl have some redeeming qualities.<br /><b>References : </b></p>
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